Sample Line Edit Reader report
About this concert
Questions I would answer for your manuscript:
- Did the story captivate me from the beginning? But because?
- Were some parts of the story confusing and why?
- What did I think about the scenario?
- Were your characters authentic and could I relate to them?
- Was there a point where the story dragged? If yes, how can you improve it?
- Was the pacing and tempo of the story good?
- Did the dialogue seem natural to me?
- Was the ending satisfactory?
- Does the writing style suit the genre/target audience?
What character analysis includes:
/ if you want me to thoroughly analyze all your characters /
- Analyze the character arc and narrative function of each character;
- Suggest possible improvements to ensure your characters are authentic;
Why choose me?:
- I promise to provide prompt, honest and detailed feedback;
- I promise extensive and in-depth line edits throughout all of your work.
- I promise to provide affordable service;
- I promise to help you get one step closer to achieving your dream! :)